Thankyou

This is a story I wrote in term 1.

I really hope you like it.

Thankyou by Novah

Delowin was her name, placed within the earth, wrapped in glossy, burned, black vines. I stand upon her as the voice calles me ‘ your welcome.’ I know my friendly Delowin means no harm, and she wanted a beautiful, grand life for me, but I did too, she didn’t have to save me.

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The frantic smell of raspberries called my nose. I opened my eyes, the sun bright, & glistening, across the summer Dawn. I slowly breath, a sigh blearts out of me, not a sad sigh, a loud sigh of happiness. I run across the meadow I was laying in. Poppies brushed, gently across my delecet, bare, feet.

“ Sadi no!”shouted my terrified, but loving, Mother.

I trip over, with a horrible bruised, and bloody nee. I have fallen over a dead soldier, still twitching with pain. Suddenly it occurred to me... I was on a battlefield.

“ Sadi run in a zig Zag, and Don’t stop.” shouted my mother.

“ I'll be brave Mother.” I called, finding it hard to stand.

“Mother, I can’t risk to lose Sadi again!” bellowed my sister, as she ran towards me

. “ Delowin No!” we emotionally Cried.

Delowin my sister, fell to the ground, I run and collapse over her, realizing a bullet lay in her stomach.

A calm, and Kind, soldor from our continent stood over me seeing my way of  the world Greets then Grabs me to his plane.

One year has passed, the war was over He said. We take Delowin and place her in the Ground the same place Our Family home used to be, sadly Accepting Her life was given to me. “ Why me” I say out loud. Black vines crawl over Delowins Dead body. My mouth drops of how that magic could happen.

The next day My Question was answered. “ thank you” I whisper. Then the vines Turns Gold.  and Delowin smiles.

Thankyou By Novah

Delowin was her name. Placed within the earth. Wrapped in glossy burned black vines. I stand upon her as the voice calles me ‘ your welcome.’ I know my friendly Delowin means no harm want a beautiful grand life for me, but I did too she didn’t have to save me.

……………..

The frantic smell of raspberries called my nose. I opened my eyes the sun bright & glistening across the summer Dawn. I slowly breath, a sigh blearts out of me, not a sad sigh a loud sigh of happiness. I run across the meadow I was laying in. Poppys brushed, gently across my delecet bare feet. “ Sadi no!”shouted my terrified but loving Mother. I trip over with a horrible bruised and bloody nee. I have fallen over a dead soldier still twitching with pain. Suddenly it occurred to me I was on a battlefield. “ Sadi run in a zig Zag and Don’t stop.” shouted my mother. “ I'll be brave Mother.” I called finding it hard to stand. “Mother I can’t risk to lose Sadi again!” bellowed my sister as she ran towards me. “ Delowin No!” we emotionally Cried. Delowin my sister, fell to the ground, I run and collapse over her, realizing a bullet lay in her stomach.

A calm and Kind soldor from our continent stood over me seeing my way of  the world Greets then Grabs me to his plane.

One year has passed, the war was over He said. We take Delowin and place her in the Ground the same place Our Family home used to be, sadly Accepting Her life was given to me. “ Why me” I say out loud. Black vines crawl over Delowins Dead body. My mouth drops of how that magic could happen.

The next day My Question was answered. “ thank you” I whisper. Then the vines Turns Gold.  and Delowin smiles.