Friday, 16 June 2017

the anchient unicorn
the fight started when the gold sun princess had a powerfull horn pop out of her  usefull brainy forehead.
she sparkled with the stars as her  white hair  camaflaged in the mist.
she was madly known as the anchient unicorn, the gold sun horse. she was a true queen, but there was one who sadly did not agree , her kind exuberent sister struk by a mystical spell when she turned 4.her sister took big controll & the fight was set aponn horse landea there loveley peacefull village.
the evil dark fairys had a promis with her sister the blue moon horse,she wanted to be the anchient horse.
they creeped amaingst the light fairys how wonderfull they were making the bright tower  where the queen lived. it was a dream in there , music ecoed. it was rathe franticly beautiful, but as the idea was taken  by the dark fairys. No one could  imagine, the great dark calstle where the plans were set by the blue moon horse.Full of dear pure evil, it was anight mare. the sun warriors fought the blue moon horse  herself. then horseta there was a secret in her tribe. Horseta was loneley she didn't even know what side to choose. she was bulleyed bad , so she gave up compleatley and ran to the mussical forrest never to be seen again.  a dome appeared around horslandea  cast by the ancient unicorn, where the sisters castles and towers sat.the dark castle was nothing compared this was a real night mare.
"Attack!!" cryed the unicorn ready for her death .
racing beating  the worriers hearts were, as they ran bravely to the blue moon horse.
 "How horrible it the end for our village " the light fairys disscussed.
 "I feel saddness its horseta she is most powerfull charge to the forrest."...(will  they sucseed?)

2 comments:

  1. Wow Novah, i love this story it's funny and interesting
    i love how you used unicorn in the story also spelling is good and punctuation. if i were a teacher i would give you 50,000 A+
    ! the unicorn story! Success

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  2. Novah i like how you used punctuation and interesting words.
    maybe next time you could you should capitalize on the beginning of the word

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