the anchient unicorn
the fight started when the gold sun princess had a powerfull horn pop out of her usefull brainy forehead.
she sparkled with the stars as her white hair camaflaged in the mist.
she was madly known as the anchient unicorn, the gold sun horse. she was a true queen, but there was one who sadly did not agree , her kind exuberent sister struk by a mystical spell when she turned 4.her sister took big controll & the fight was set aponn horse landea there loveley peacefull village.
the evil dark fairys had a promis with her sister the blue moon horse,she wanted to be the anchient horse.
they creeped amaingst the light fairys how wonderfull they were making the bright tower where the queen lived. it was a dream in there , music ecoed. it was rathe franticly beautiful, but as the idea was taken by the dark fairys. No one could imagine, the great dark calstle where the plans were set by the blue moon horse.Full of dear pure evil, it was anight mare. the sun warriors fought the blue moon horse herself. then horseta there was a secret in her tribe. Horseta was loneley she didn't even know what side to choose. she was bulleyed bad , so she gave up compleatley and ran to the mussical forrest never to be seen again. a dome appeared around horslandea cast by the ancient unicorn, where the sisters castles and towers sat.the dark castle was nothing compared this was a real night mare.
"Attack!!" cryed the unicorn ready for her death .
racing beating the worriers hearts were, as they ran bravely to the blue moon horse.
"How horrible it the end for our village " the light fairys disscussed.
"I feel saddness its horseta she is most powerfull charge to the forrest."...(will they sucseed?)
Wow Novah, i love this story it's funny and interesting
ReplyDeletei love how you used unicorn in the story also spelling is good and punctuation. if i were a teacher i would give you 50,000 A+
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Novah i like how you used punctuation and interesting words.
ReplyDeletemaybe next time you could you should capitalize on the beginning of the word